vanilla shoppe

The fragrant flavor floats around you as you past by an unassuming, quaint store.
You turn your head to see it's a stylish, mini dessert store tucked into the side of the street. How cute.
Upon closer inspection though, you see the only flavour they offer is vanilla.


Welcome to Vanilla, a project page and application critique site run by Ceilidh!
All sorts of critiques are offered here, from reading board or neomail apps to a full appraisal of your petpage app or project page. Vanilla is here to assist, and everyone is welcome to come and enjoy some delicious refreshments.



Our Guarantee

At Vanilla, we guarantee you an authentic, impeccable vanilla experience. Our desserts are made with 100% pure vanilla, which we create from the finest beans found around the globe.

Vanilla offers high quality critiques for your applications and project pages. I promise to be thorough, unbiased and honest in my critiques. Vanilla also promises all applicants and applications anonymity. Your application will never be linked on this site.

For any fosters who are worried that an application you are receiving has been critiqued at Vanilla. I guarantee that any work in the application is 100% done by the applicant. By receiving a critique, they are just getting suggestions on work they have already completed. If you would like to know if any of your applicants have gotten their applications critiqued at Vanilla, feel free to neomail me.








our lovely menu

You sit down on a stool at a black and white folded table.
On the table, along with a white orchid in a jar, is a menu trimmed with lace.
You decide to take a peek and see what could possibly be on the menu at a place that only serves vanilla.

Vanilla Ice Cream

If you're looking for an uninhibited dose of fresh vanilla, this is the choice for you! Made from the most delicious vanilla beans, our Vanilla Ice Cream is sure to delight and lighten up your day.

This type of critique is for accounts.
With this order, Ceilidh will look at all of your accounts and review it based on the following criteria: pet customization, pet lookup, petpage, user lookup. You can also opt to add on any of the following criteria: trophy, avatar, gallery, shop, themes, and stamps.
To qualify for an account review, you must have original content of some sort on a userlookup, pet lookup, or petpage.

Serving time for Vanilla Ice Cream is within 2-3 business days.
Vanilla Ice Cream is currently in stock!
Please make your way to the counter to place your order.



Vanilla Cookies

Unbeknownst to many, depending on where they come from, vanilla beans can have hints of chocolate or floral flavors. Those are the ones we have used to create this creamy, decadent cookie.

This type of critique is for board and neomail applications.
With this order, Ceilidh will look at the organization, grammar, sentence structure, spelling and general flow of your application.
For an application to be qualified as a neomail app, it should not exceed 4200 characters (three neomails) and should be intended to either be sent through neomail or put on a blank petpage.

Serving time for Vanilla Cookies is within 30 minutes.
Vanilla Cookies is currently in stock!
Please make your way to the counter to place your order.



Vanilla Cupcake

A signature special of our dessert shoppe is the Vanilla Cupcake. It is layered with the most fragrant vanilla for a fluffy bite and dreamy taste.

This type of critique is for petpage applications or project pages.
With this order, Ceilidh will look at the layout of your application/page. She will take into account the overall vibe, readability, and organization of the page.
For an application/page to qualify, it cannot be a on a blank petpage, and preferably, it is not on an unedited premade layout.

Serving time for Vanilla Cupcake is within 1-2 business days.
Vanilla Cupcake is currently out of stock!
We are so sorry for the inconvenience. We expect to have more on October 30, 2015.



Vanilla Cake

Our Vanilla Cake is made from only the finest vanilla beans. It boasts triple layers filled with sumptuous creme and topped off with a gorgeous vanilla icing. You may buy just one slice. However let's be honest, the whole cake is what you should really be after.

This type of critique is for petpage applications or project pages.
With this order, Ceilidh will look at the content of your application/page. She will consider the organization, grammar, sentence structure, spelling and general flow of the page. She will also suggest any absent sections.
A Vanilla Cake slice is just for one section of your application/page. A whole Vanilla Cake is for the entire application/page.
To be qualified for a slice, the section must be completely written. To be qualified for a whole, the entire application/page must be completely written.

Serving time for a slice of Vanilla Cake is within 2-3 business days.
Serving time for a whole Vanilla Cake is within 4-5 business days.
Vanilla Cake is currently out of stock!
We are so sorry for the inconvenience. We expect to have more on October 30, 2015.



Vanilla Deluxe Set

This is our wonderful set and catering service! We do all parties, occasions and special events. Indulge in the ultimate vanilla adventure with a cupcake explosion, platters of cookies, and an exquisite layered cake.

This type of critique is for petpage applications or project pages.
With this order, Ceilidh will look at the content and layout of your application/page. She will consider the organization, grammar, sentence structure, spelling and general flow. She will also review the layout for organization, readability, and feel.
For an application/page to qualify, it must be entirely completed.

Serving time for Vanilla Deluxe Set is within 5 business days.
Vanilla Deluxe Set is currently out of stock!
We are so sorry for the inconvenience. We expect to have more on October 30, 2015.



Vanilla Icing Jar

If you can't get enough of our delicious Vanilla, why not take some of it home with you? With our new special, Vanilla Icing Jar, you are able to take some of our creamy, smooth icing home to use for all your baking needs.

This type of critique is for any application that has already been submitted.
With this order, Ceilidh will briefly look at your overall application and let you know what you could have improved or what you did really well. In short, it is a post-submission evaluation.
For an application to qualify, the deadline for the application must have already passed, and the application must have actually been submitted.

Serving time for a Vanilla Icing Jar is within 1-2 business days.
Vanilla Icing Jar is currently in stock!
Please make your way to the counter to order.








ordering counter

You slowly wind your way through the scattered tables and chairs to the counter.
A little chalkboard off to the side reads: ring the bell for assistance!
Glancing at the glass display case, you place your order.



Guidelines

Although this is a small establishment, we do have our standards. We will not serve you without shoes or shirt. No pets are allowed in our shoppe. No refunds are available. We apologize for any inconvenience caused.

1. You may only get one critique per application/page at Vanilla.

2. You may only get one application OR one project page critiqued at Vanilla per week.

3. A critique with Vanilla does not guarantee that you will be chosen to adopt the pet you're applying for.

4. By ordering and having it accepted, you are allowing me to disclose to your foster that you have received a critique from Vanilla. This also goes for project pages in place of or linked to an application.

5. I reserve the right to decline to critique any application or page.



Ordering

Please fill out this form and give it to Ceilidh to complete your order!
Once your order is finished, it will be delivered through neomail to ensure you, your application, and its critique remains anonymous.

Your name:
Order:
Pet you're applying for (or goal pet):
Rules page/board link (or NA):
Your application/page:
Application deadline (or NA):








delivery and pick up

Feeling a slight buzz of excitement you make your way back to your table and settle down.
The waitress comes by and lays down a gold embellished white tray with your order on it.
Please enjoy your dessert, we hope you've had a wonderful experience here!



Eve

Vanilla Cupcake
Order Picked Up



Angie

Vanilla Cupcake
Order Received 10/15/2015



Macy

Vanilla Cupcake
Order Received 10/17/2015



Name

Order
Status








your waitress

At Vanilla we aim to bring you the most flawless service. Our servers and waitresses have undergone extensive training to meet your every needs. Please do not hesitate to approach one of our staff if you have any inquiries about our menu items or ordering guidelines.



Qualifications

Hello, this is Ceilidh your waitress here, and I am always pleased to help and provide excellent service!
I have been on neo for eight years and have made countless of board, neomail and petpage applications. I know what is expected in applications and what most fosters look for in a great one.
For some concrete proof - I have adopted Sretno the UC baby kougra, kit034 the UC darigan mynci, and Ravtah the UC mutant usul all from board and neomail applications. For Sretno, I also presented past applications for UC baby kougras and my project page. There were over 50 applicants for each of the three. I adopted Valek (formerly a pink shoyru) through a comprehensive petpage application.
Furthermore, I am a journalism major, so I am well practiced in copy editing for grammar mistakes and spelling errors. I have an extensive vocabulary and although I do not code layouts, I do know how to make magazine, newspaper and page layouts. I have also studied page design for print and typography.
If you have any further questions about my experience, feel free to neomail me!



Frequently Asked Questions

What does business days mean?
It doesn't mean anything. It just goes with the theme of the page. If an order will take 2-3 business days, it means that it will take 2-3 days.

Why won't you critique my application/page more than once?
If the critique is for a petpage application or project page, chances are it can take me hours to critique it. Therefore, I will only be critiquing a certain number of them each week. It is unfair for me to spend so much time critiquing yours if it means others will not get a critique. Furthermore, if it is a board or neomail application, it should not take more than one critique.

What if you're also applying for a pet?
I will still be open to critiquing applications for the same pet that I am applying for. I promise that I will not be biased. I will still look through the application with utmost care. However I will put a notice on the front page if I am applying for a pet, so you may know before choosing to place an order.

What if I want to keep my application private or if I don't want people to know I'm applying?
Vanilla has a 100% private application policy, which means we ensure that no one will find your application through this site. We will not link to your application nor will your critique be posted on here.

Why is Vanilla Ice Cream and Vanilla Cookies always out of stock?
Due to the short serving time for both of these orders, they will only be in stock when I am online for a long period of time. This is to ensure that you don't send in a form for a board application, and have me only see it hours later (after you've already turned in your application).










Thank you for visiting us here at Vanilla, we hope you've had a memorable time.
Please do recommend our delicacies to your friends and come back soon!






For an equally delightful experience, please visit any of our esteemed affiliates!






Vanilla is currently being advertised and listed on these sites!

♡ Teacup ♡ Hiraeth


(If you would like to be affiliates with or list Vanilla, please send Ceilidh a neomail.)


Vanilla was created on August 23, 2015.
A total of 10 applications have been critiqued.
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