Name: Alia
Position: Editor
Jobs: Editing Always Connected to Perfection ♥
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A bit about me: Hello there! My name is Alia. I'm a creative, nice, and interesting person. I like chatting and you can mostly find me on the GC or HC. I am sometimes on other boards though. I love cute things, (especially rabbits,) and brownies. If you're lonely, be sure to send me a neomail! It's always open!

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Layout ~ I really did enjoy my first impression on your layout! It was absolutely stunning! I really like the colour scheme you chose. Everything was clear and crisp! With layouts like yours, it's really hard to find mistakes.

10/10

Organization ~ I did notice a few things on your organization that could be fixed.

Let's start off with this chibi. Do you notice anything wierd about it? It looks really wide compared to all the rest of your chibis. This could affect how people look at your selection of premades. They might think that the actual chibi is wide. I found more like this in your "Neopets" premade section.

Here is my little comparison. I took a chibi from your "Faerie" selection that looked quite normal, and another one that looked squish. Again, with the same reason above, this could affect how the client looks at your premades. There are some like this in your "Faeries", "Paint Brushes", and "Mermaids" section.
8.5/10


Spelling/Grammar ~ Now for spelling and grammar.
You Wrote - If you have more questions about Bisou. Please read the FAQ first and if your question isn't answered, then send me a neomail!
Fixing -If you have more questions about Bisou. isn't a sentance. You could write If you have more questions about Bisou, please read the FAQ. If your question isn't answered, then send me a neomail! This sentance was found in your opening paragraph.

You Wrote: - I won't be drawing the left side because that portion will mostly be covered up by whatever the character will be holding :)
Fixed - I won't be drawing the left side because that portion will mostly be covered up by whatever the character will be holding. :) There is a period behind holding. This sentance was found in your "Complete Walkthrough - Holding a Pet Pose".

This was all I could find! It seems you had better spelling and grammar than you thought!

8.5/10

Content ~ Now I will be reviewing your content.

Let's start with this Jasmine chibi. It looks exactly like her, except for one little thing. I personally, think her skin tone needs to be a bit lighter. (I think it should be more like Pocohantas' skin tone.)

When I first glanced at this chibi, I didn't really know what species of neopet it was. I can see how drawing Ixi's are hard because they have limited features you can add onto your chibi. I would suggest making the ixi horns just a tad bit bigger so that it is more clear on what type of neopet it is.

Overall, Bisou does have very high quality content. You have a wide selection of premades and you have done lots of requests.
9/10

Final Notes/Comments ~ I'm done your review Ashe! Thank you for letting me review Bisou! It was a lovely site. Your site has very high quality content and I would definitely recommend it!

Here is your final score:
36/40 or 90%!

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